Sound Editing Poetic

I have been editing the poetic piece with the influence that I have previously stated in my blog, the screen shot below shows a rough edit of the sounds that will be involved. 

Sound Notes - 

Everything has been straight forward in terms of putting the sounds where they need to go. 
Currently trying to get the sound of the heartbeat to come to forefront and make the crowd die out, the transition for this is proving difficult as I want it to be as clean as possible.